I’m not really convinced with regards to the orange colour, so I tried incorporating another element from the original drawing; that being, having the sketching layers visible.

It’s got a completely different effect on this image.. it almost looks like a shadow, as though there’s nothing inside the figure’s outlines.

I’m kind of losing hope that I can make these two work in the same set, I think I’m going to have to choose between them, but I really don’t want to!!